All of the racist stuff ruined it for me. Shit just isn't funny or entertaining. Was told recently that those comments aren't allowed but they sure look to be alive and well to me.
There is no doubt that it is very good and interesting as a first works.
If you show your creativity and at the same time follow the good comments and suggestions expressed by the commenters, the results of your works will improve one after another.
All of the racist stuff ruined it for me. Shit just isn't funny or entertaining. Was told recently that those comments aren't allowed but they sure look to be alive and well to me.
I hope this is a new, regular weekly posting....
I will do my best to be non-socially relevant with my sarcasm in the hopes of seeing my name in lights!
There is no doubt that it is very good and interesting as a first works.
If you show your creativity and at the same time follow the good comments and suggestions expressed by the commenters, the results of your works will improve one after another.